In this paragraph, there is[are] only 117 reading words. I have to try hard to make it long. The author began to give a standard of acceptable showoffs. Although exulting is acceptable, we need a standard to differentiate it with other types of showing off. The author used the word "shamelessly" to describe exulting. In my opinion, shameless guy can be a humourous[humorous]guy sometimes.The only thing is the standard. So the author wrote it in the passage, such as stopping strangers to say you've been published is overdoing. Now I have a Chinese sentence in my mind, but I don't know how to say it in English. So I change it into my own word. I think angle and evil are only the different side[sides]of a piece of paper. We need to care about it to avoid being showing off. |